FIFTH YEAR, Lucy Buckner

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, width: 400px; background: #E9E9E9; -moz-border-radius: 22px 22px 22px 22px; -o-border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; -webkit-border-radius: 22px 22px 22px 22px; border-radius: 22px 22px 22px 22px; border-bottom: #1A1A1A solid 6px; border-right: #1A1A1A solid 6px; border-left: #1A1A1A solid 6px; border-top: #1A1A1A solid 6px;] [b]VOCALOID[/b], [i]Lily[/i]; Lucy Buckner lucy fae buckner CREATED BY: Hanna identification ← [style= padding: 3px; margin-left: 9px; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 10px; color: #1A1A1A;]→ alias, Ridere → age, 15 → birthdate, 4/6 → gender, Female → sexuality, Straight → nationality, Canadian → blood status, Half [/style] magical ← [style= padding: 3px; margin-left: 9px; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 10px; color: #1A1A1A;]→ house/subject, STAFF ONLY (unless professor) → familiar, Bat named Grogger → wand, EBONY, Serpent Scale, 9 3/4" inflexible → patronus, Blue jay → boggart, Drowning → claims, N/A [/style] positives ← [style= padding: 3px; margin-left: 9px; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 10px; color: #1A1A1A;]→Loyal →Forgiving →Independent →Clever →Romantic [/style] negatives ← [style= padding: 3px; margin-left: 9px; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 10px; color: #1A1A1A;]→Klutz →Overr-protective →Easily Stressed →Insecure →Shy [/style] other ← [style= padding: 3px; margin-left: 9px; font-family: verdana; text-align: justify; font-size: 10px; color: #1A1A1A;]Lucy got off to a rocky start. When she was born, she was taken from her birth parents and sent to foster care. She wasn't adopted until she was 13, and by then, she had learned some bad habits from previous families. Luckily, she got adopted by a wealthy, loving couple. They taught her how to behave right. She loved them with all her heart, and they loved her. Although, one day, they family decided to go to the beach. On their way, a drunk driver ran a red light and sped right into them. Lucy was the only survivor. Diagnosed with depression and acute stress disorder, Lucy was in the hospital for a month. Afterwards, she was adopted by the nurse that had tended to her during her hospital days. Although, because of the tragic event, Lucy brought up a lot of her awful habits, causing a hard time for her new father. When Lucy turned 16, her dad had had enough. He sent her to several institutions, helping somewhat. [/style] CODED BY KIMCHI FOR SPELLBOUND ONLY

---Hold up!

Well first off welcome to Spellbound!

Now you only have a few things to fix before you can be well on your way to roleplaying on here.

First thing I noticed was that you have chosen an faceclaim that has already been claimed. Please find an faceclaim that isn't already taken by one of the lovely members here.

Another thing that needs revised is her history. I'm curious to know as to why she was taken away from her original parents when she was born. No child can be taken away from their parents and put into foster care without a logical reason.

There is also no mention of magic or Hogwarts anywhere in her history. She's a half blood so which of her parents is a muggle and which one is the witch or wizard. And when she turned 16 she was put into institutions? She's 15 on her profile. And if she was in nothing but institutions then she'd be better off being a civilians rather than a student. But there is no mention of magic in her other section so right now she's pretty muggle looking.